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Re: Think of me
Well the actual story behind this is that it is what a person who's dying of a disease is saying to their partner. Basically they don't want their partner to ...
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: Star crossed lovers
Is it just me or do all the great love stories end in tragedy and often death? Take Tristian & Isolde for example - both died of broken hearts in ...
Feb 22, 2007 -
Re: Think of me
When you’re down, When you’re lost, Think of me. Think of what we had, And what we lost. Think of what we almost were. Think of me, How I used ...
Feb 22, 2007 -
Re: Enough to Live
I really enjoyed reading this, it had a really nice plot and i especially liked the irony of the ending. Only real flaws i could find were a couple of ...
Feb 22, 2007 -
Re: Dear Diary - installment 3
(I know that the argument between the mum and dad needs to be improved, but i can't work out how 2 do it. if u have any suggestions about that ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Love Song
i would class it as a short story. does the competition have any restrictions on how many words you can use etc? cause if your stories fits the regulations, i ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: Loneliness
thanx 4 the advice!
Feb 20, 2007 -
Re: Love Is...
depends on whether it's unrequited or not. If it is unrequited love sucks and is ridiculously painful. if it's returned then it can be wondeful. One of my favourite analogies ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Loneliness
She lies in her room Quiet and broken Drowning in unshed tears Deafened by silent screams Haunted by words never said And chances never taken Tired, hurt, lonely, scared Lost ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Alternate Reality
I liked it. I thought it had nice flow, although i agree with Claudette that it sounded much more like a song than a poem. Which is okay, except that ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Madness
Don;t worry, i wrote this poem ages ago and no one seems to get what it's about. It's supposed to be about love and that it makes you insane as ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Hello
hi everyone, my actual name is Holly, so feel free to call me that. i like to read pretty much anything and i write whatever pops into head even if ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Dear Diary
thanx for the advice. il look out for that book. and yeah i know that the start is a bit dry, but it gets a lot better as it goes ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Sweet Madness
It’s the sweetest madness. Warm and cold at the same time. Untouchable, unbreakable, unstoppable. Light and dark intermingled. More alive than ever before, More dead than I could ever be. ...
Feb 19, 2007 -
Re: Dear Diary installment 2
Sorry if there is a bit of an overlap between he installments, but when i wrote this in word i didn't have it split up at all, it was just ...
Feb 19, 2007
