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  • Other Poetry Re: You love me

    You love me You love me so. Everyday I watch you stumble around those words. Watch them roll across your tongue. Watch you bite them back. Three little words, Why ...

    Jun 27, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: i dont knowwww

    I think that it was good, but could be improved. For instance you could go into more detail about the red nights and why they're red or why they effect ...

    Jun 27, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Next Chapter part 2.

    (Hi, I'm back after a massive lull. Tell me what you think, as always any feedback is much appreciated). Dear April, I read my diary all the way through today. ...

    Jun 5, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Next Chapter (sequel to Dear Diary)

    Dear April, My Mum made me go and see a counselor, she says I need someone to talk to about your deat…what happened to you. No one really seems to ...

    Apr 26, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Already Over (re-write)

    I've basically, shortened it to make it less repetitive. tell me whether you think it's better like this or not I'm trying not to cry, but tears are already in ...

    Apr 25, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Already Over

    I'm trying not to cry, but tears are already in my eyes. I'm trying not to fall, trying to stay whole, but I've already fallen. I'm already broken. Cause nothing ...

    Apr 24, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Dear Diary part 5

    Wednesday, Dear Diary, April’s mum handed me a letter this morning. She said that she had found it in April’s room with my name on it. I tentatively opened it ...

    Apr 21, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Dear Diary installment 4

    Monday, Dear Diary, Oh my god, I would swear that everyone is staring at me. And I have this really paranoid feeling that everyone’s talking about me too. A deadly ...

    Mar 21, 2007
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Run Rabbit

    Run rabbit, run rabbit, run, run, run. The rabbit tears through the field, A white blur in the midst of all the green. He pauses, his nose twitching. Then he ...

    Feb 26, 2007
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    I can't really remember, it's all a blur really, my parent's fights seem to dominate all my memories, and even then it's nothing specific, just a memory of a shouting, ...

    Feb 26, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Do you get attatched to your characters?

    I had that with one of my characters and in the end it was horrible because in the end to kill her off to get to the next point in ...

    Feb 26, 2007
  • Homework Help Re: School Uniforms

    I've worn a school uniform at all my schools and i think ultimately it's a good thing. It stops people being able to instantly spot the chavs and goths and ...

    Feb 25, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Do you get attatched to your characters?

    yeah i always get really attached to my characters, and when there is something horrible going on in their life (which i've inflicted no less), it is so heartbreaking. I ...

    Feb 24, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Star crossed lovers

    I think your referring to a bittersweet ending, where it's kind of sad, but also kind of happy in a way as well. Like in this book i read (not ...

    Feb 23, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Star crossed lovers

    Personally, i think one of the reasons why the classics always have to end in sorrow or death is because there's no other credible way to end it. I mean ...

    Feb 23, 2007


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman