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Re: You love me
You love me You love me so. Everyday I watch you stumble around those words. Watch them roll across your tongue. Watch you bite them back. Three little words, Why ...
Jun 27, 2007 -
Re: i dont knowwww
I think that it was good, but could be improved. For instance you could go into more detail about the red nights and why they're red or why they effect ...
Jun 27, 2007 -
Re: Next Chapter part 2.
(Hi, I'm back after a massive lull. Tell me what you think, as always any feedback is much appreciated). Dear April, I read my diary all the way through today. ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: The Next Chapter (sequel to Dear Diary)
Dear April, My Mum made me go and see a counselor, she says I need someone to talk to about your deat…what happened to you. No one really seems to ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: Already Over (re-write)
I've basically, shortened it to make it less repetitive. tell me whether you think it's better like this or not I'm trying not to cry, but tears are already in ...
Apr 25, 2007 -
Re: Already Over
I'm trying not to cry, but tears are already in my eyes. I'm trying not to fall, trying to stay whole, but I've already fallen. I'm already broken. Cause nothing ...
Apr 24, 2007 -
Re: Dear Diary part 5
Wednesday, Dear Diary, April’s mum handed me a letter this morning. She said that she had found it in April’s room with my name on it. I tentatively opened it ...
Apr 21, 2007 -
Re: Dear Diary installment 4
Monday, Dear Diary, Oh my god, I would swear that everyone is staring at me. And I have this really paranoid feeling that everyone’s talking about me too. A deadly ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Run Rabbit
Run rabbit, run rabbit, run, run, run. The rabbit tears through the field, A white blur in the midst of all the green. He pauses, his nose twitching. Then he ...
Feb 26, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
I can't really remember, it's all a blur really, my parent's fights seem to dominate all my memories, and even then it's nothing specific, just a memory of a shouting, ...
Feb 26, 2007 -
Re: Do you get attatched to your characters?
I had that with one of my characters and in the end it was horrible because in the end to kill her off to get to the next point in ...
Feb 26, 2007 -
Re: School Uniforms
I've worn a school uniform at all my schools and i think ultimately it's a good thing. It stops people being able to instantly spot the chavs and goths and ...
Feb 25, 2007 -
Re: Do you get attatched to your characters?
yeah i always get really attached to my characters, and when there is something horrible going on in their life (which i've inflicted no less), it is so heartbreaking. I ...
Feb 24, 2007 -
Re: Star crossed lovers
I think your referring to a bittersweet ending, where it's kind of sad, but also kind of happy in a way as well. Like in this book i read (not ...
Feb 23, 2007 -
Re: Star crossed lovers
Personally, i think one of the reasons why the classics always have to end in sorrow or death is because there's no other credible way to end it. I mean ...
Feb 23, 2007
