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It started off quite bland and confusing( this is probably cs you didnt describe his situation or destanation that clearly)but the more i read , the better it got , ...

This was weird , this isnt your normal style. ITs still good though. You managed to tell a whole story of eveloution but keep it interesting, but i do suggest ...

Firstly dont use words like linen or breeched,cs not many know what they mean, this is way too complicated , this would throw me strait of a story, Sorry to ...

DEAR LORD!, thank you duskglimmer!,you must of spent ages doin this, and i dont take it lightly. I hearby vow to review anything you write(that i know of) within the ...

blue , err...pig, hedgehog, dragon, fat troll, cloud, red-dog

I cant master spell check , its like a bloody goat but with feathers

I...This is the best thing i've ever read. How the hell dyou do this, your like the new Tolkien, and im not just saying that...really. My writing compared to this ...

Sam walked through the silent forest , the trees were dense on his sides and the path he had taken was caving in , slowly getting narrower and melding into ...

i am blob , the own a pencil and a chewed piece of bubblegum. i welcome you into this little oasis for young writers. c u rnd

A normal kid would of said ' ok....' but not me , for i am not normal. This story was great and is a change from the seriousness of alot ...

halo, im also new. You should now that in real life im a blob of trancelucent blue, c u rnd :D and no , i dont own a pet maggot, ...

whoa!,thats along poem. It was wierd but good. IT had good descriptons of what your feeling and in a wierd canna way it reflected that image of a nut( im ...

thankyou for bieng truthfull, it wasnt acctually a dream , he woke up in Haven . but ill take your advice and edit it out

The mountains were topped with layers of white snow. Around them the grasslands swayed in the morning breeze. The sun was high in the sky by now, its yellow rays ...

why isnt kingkong up there , thats probably the best movie ever made