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i know im a terrible writer but thanks for bieng honest ( i know you didnt mestion annything about me bieng terrible) next time ill take more time making sence ...

Yellow fields of sand stretched out and dominated the horizon; there were no dunes, dry dessert plants or insects to be seen. This dessert was completely flat with no hills ...

I WELCOME THY . ohhhhhhhhhhh teo child how is thy pig mixed with gandalfs left nipple tho hallo mathew (teo, matt, mateo) , this site is eddictictive, it gives you ...

more....you must wtite more... . this was so welly done, the truthfullness of putting stuff like " it wont seem believable" made it believabe and the way you told it ...

i didnt get any of that story, matbe its ny lack of logic or somin but it had absaloutly no start , beginning or end, it had no scene setting ...

this is such a realistic remake (exept the wierd egg)of what happens whan i try to write somthing decent, i write thinking im the greatest story-teller in the world , ...

this was.......like the........blue buttock of voldermort, the god of love. ps: this was great , it had an atmosphere that is rare and realistic, i could almost feel the weather ...

A abseloutly fantastic mix between the story of shakes pears and the style of tolkien, i dont no why its in fantasy fiction ( maybe it will be revealed later ...

Earths defenses were being mobilized, great turrets attached to the planet twisted to face the approaching ships, Soldiers on the ground loaded there weapons and changed into thick white armor, ...

It was realy hard to understand , your style was good but you mixed errelavent stuff like the formulas with horrer scenes. Make it simpler and use more dialog, cs ...

I dont get it, one minute a brave girl trana save her sister next minute shes demanding to hang her dead sister in the village......... . Other than this , ...

It....dosent make .....sence... . Nice poem. :D must eat chair....

This was a Great story, didnt need to have a climax of swords or guns to be good .like the ending. And about the exams , if you have nothing ...

This was brilliantly done, so much that even though it was only about somthing unfictiony it held my attention and i read it all, it must of took alot of ...

Whoa!, firstly thankyou, i think youve just changed my style completly ( but in a very good way) all your tips got me thinking about how complicated litracy is, And ...