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I...wha?...i dont get it... but other than the really confusing text it was funny, and i loved the description of the room at the start, but if ure gonna make ...

oh, i know its not fantasy fiction but it will be convorted to ff soon (ff : fantasy fiction)

i thought this was great , but there aer efew stuff you need to change; you wrote it in too much detail, ant your adjectives were too long and complicated ...

Jane farcry woke with little elegance, a damp patch of pillow soaked in her snot had formed through the night beneath her large nose, her eyes, large and brown as ...

This , in a really kinda wierd way, reminded me of the mysticalness and magicel feeling i got when reading lord of the rings , but it wasent like coppy ...

This was by far better than hellstools, i could actually understand what was going on( exept at the the start with the flying horses, did he and the horse take ...

imagine , a colour full inguana perched on the top left corner of the site . and about the dragun, its used so much that if you type dragon in ...

This was so wierd, but it wasent bad, it was like this really cool piece of work which you can relax while reading cuase there were no huge adjectives or ...

yep, ive heard all about the gay kitten twins , i meen, imagine the consequnces of sniffing ...this is about the twins right?

This was really good, im not saying this story is good or the way u used your style , im saying That your style is good, its clear and to ...

Cheers for the reviews poor imp and roaming shadow, it really made my day. If youve got annything you want reviewed just pm the blob.

"Yes, I told you, that’s the only dream I’ve ever had " Tadeo addressed his physiatrist with growing annoyance , the past seventy sessions proved fruitless and he didn’t see ...

I loved it. It showed real depth, not just the usuall stuff, but one thing, lots of it was confusing and overdescribed, you used too many complicated words that just ...

Thanks , I thought this story was dead. To Torpid:I might continue it after i finish what im currently working On, but for now ill just let it die off ...

H-a-l-l-o-b-l-a-c-k-s-h-e-e-p my name is blob , im for cow parlament, who are you supporting he...eeeeh...sorry, u should now i can get unnormal at times, welcome to yws , youll find ...