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blair93

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: poem-Yes, we need to know

    i agree with you and im not saying it dosnt need changing.i think its too short and in your words "it needs to paint a picter" i want there to ...

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: poem-Yes, we need to know

    i didnt ask YOU what you thought.and i am not being rude thank you very much.if you think thats rude than you havnt seen nothing.instead of just going on about ...

    Feb 11, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: poem-Yes, we need to know

    im not saying it dosnt need alot of changing cause it dose.i think it dose repeat a lot.and it dosnt tell much of a story.its more of a personal one ...

    Feb 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: poem-Yes, we need to know

    yeah but im not you and i like this one.start giving out your shots to somebody else kid

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poem

    oh by the by "yes, be new" dose happen to be the tital.i'm still trying to get the hang of working this thing.i couldnt figer out how to post things ...

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: To Lily

    aww this is so expressive.ive read so many things in my life.but things like these apeal to me.its like your telling a whole story.and i like how you go from ...

    Feb 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poem

    thank you all very much. when i write i want anyone to be able to talk a part of what im saying and aply it to their own life.there are ...

    Feb 9, 2009


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