blair93

i agree with you and im not saying it dosnt need changing.i think its too short and in your words "it needs to paint a picter" i want there to ...

this is very thought id give you a review. your poem is a bit looks like you go on this path..and your searching for somthing..but on the road you lose ...

i didnt ask YOU what you thought.and i am not being rude thank you very much.if you think thats rude than you havnt seen nothing.instead of just going on about ...

im not saying it dosnt need alot of changing cause it dose.i think it dose repeat a lot.and it dosnt tell much of a story.its more of a personal one ...

yeah but im not you and i like this one.start giving out your shots to somebody else kid

oh by the by "yes, be new" dose happen to be the tital.i'm still trying to get the hang of working this thing.i couldnt figer out how to post things ...

i really like this even though the guy is taqlking about whats happening,its like hes talking about himself.you could tell what kind of person he is. with the news of ...

Yes, we need to know I’ll be for you To me you are forever Always remember my tears You are forever To me You’ll always be forever That’s because That’s ...

lol.i dont like to read stuff like this but your word has a pop of life in it. i think poetry like this reflects off the person.shows who you are. ...

omg i think im addicted. it was real good.but i think in the beganing you intorduced the story like it was complicated and used alot of big-words.than towards the end ...

aww this is so expressive.ive read so many things in my life.but things like these apeal to me.its like your telling a whole story.and i like how you go from ...

thank you all very much. when i write i want anyone to be able to talk a part of what im saying and aply it to their own life.there are ...

i like the detail.but one.they just let him in? how old is he? how old dose he look? two.the guy just handed him the drink without a second thought? also ...

Yes, be new Be new And try Believe Be And I will not believe it Nothing dies It’s still in you Your black heart? Your white heart? It’s still in ...

wow and this just poped out of your yard or wat