blacksterj

Hey - an interesting start. Is It is the 41st Millenium and the Imperium of Man is under constant attack. The God Emperor of Mankind sits on his Golden throne ...

Historical fiction (Bernard Cornwell + Pen = Genius), a bit of alternate history or a good ol' bit of fantasy. Helps you to escape the world a bit. Usually avoid ...

---> Collen / Cadmium - Thinks for the help, and restraining yourself from some scathing remark against my noobness. Where are you living then???? US of A?? And yeah, Europe ...

Thanks for the helpful critique. The thoughts were supposed to be in italics; I'm not sure why they aren't. I was thinking it was all a bit description-laden, so I'll ...

[Somewhere in the English countryside - 1946] They’d be hitting Birmingham again, thought Alex, peering from his nest of corrugated iron and scorched brick. Once more fire lashed across the ...

I have to say this piece has real potential; you really convey the atmosphere of what would normally be a rather mundane incident, and turn it into something a little ...

An intriguing start I must say - you really convey the detachment Silas has as he tries to distance himself from his mother, and the possibility of death. The atmosphere ...

The tentative first step. You look nervously from side to side, alert, poised, anxiety clinging at your throat. Play it cool. Be succint, be polite, be subtle. :lol: HHHHHEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYY :lol: ...