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Whatever man. I didn't put any REAL thought into this. Pretty much it was just a thing I did that I felt like posting, just for the heck of it. ...

Oops, yeah good point. And It's for the play, unfortunately...

Sorry, but Brutus and Cassius were brothers. It says so in the play. Actually, they were half-brothers (Cassius was married to Brutus's sister) but in Rome that was pretty much ...

This was a creative writing assignment I did for English, so it's not that exciting. I was supposed to write as if I were a centurion that was supposed to ...

Yeah, well in my defense poetry is supposed to leave you hanging, isn't it? You're supposed to think about it. Sometimes the best way to get attention is the title, ...

Ah, OK sorry.

This haiku IS 5-7-5 actually.

Thanks, I'll remember that.

Whoa. Nice. Just a few nitpicks. We stood silently as they charged into the room and threw torches onto the furniture and screamed blood hurdling cries. Should be blood-curdling. They ...

Hey, I'll be a reviewer. Good job on your NaNoWriMo. Anyway, I feel like picking and prying, since it's a small piece. (mwahahaha...) The Mists blanketed the narrow valley. Any ...

A haiku. Why do you hate me? Glaring at me with those eyes? Have I done you wrong? I appreciate any feedback.

Thanks, captain.classy. I'm not a poet, obviously, so I appreciate anything that will make my poetry better.

I'm sorry to say I disagree with this poem. You definitely have a way with words. Even though it doesn't seem to have any visible pattern (Which, correct me if ...

Excellent. That was on of the best pieces I have ever read on this site. I actually haven't read the Divine Comedy, but according to the other reviewers, this is ...

In poems, there should be some sort of pattern or rhythm, I think. Your last stanza has two more verses than the other two (or verse has more stanzas, whatever. ...