blackmist_riverfrost

Thank you everyone who has reviewed my work. I am currently having a major writer's block and can't think of anything else to write onto this story though. It stinks!!!!

Ok, I fixed it. So here is the revised version: Carter Adams, an unwanted teen of nineteen years, walked down the busy sidewalk of Cincinnati, looking at the people talking ...

Thank you for the review Billy. It is greatly appreciated. I edited all mistakes I found and added in anything you said that would sound better in it.

Myself, personally, thought that the bolds and underlining brought out the emotion in this very poem. I can tell that you, or someone you know, have written this from experience. ...

I like your poem very much but there are a few things I noticed and I have fixed the in bold. On my Own I am not afraid to be ...

I just sort of threw this together during a school day. I just want to see what others think of it. Carter Adams, an unwanted teen of 19 years, walked ...

That poem was very interesting. I could really see someone doing that. I loved it and I think you should write more poems like it. You are a brilliant writer ...

Ok, so before I review this peice I must say that I do like your work. It is catching and interesting but there are a few things that I noticed. ...

I thought your poem was lovely but: [quote="elephantwalrus]A Mother's Song Her hand rests softly like the whitest pearl, A gentle gem pulled out of raging seas. While sleeping, she’s the ...

I thought it was very nice, but the different lined ways, is that on purpose? The foreboding clouds rumble. Mana from heaven. Other than my question about that, your peom ...

I thought it was very nice, but maybe try to add in some emotion other than wonder. Other than that, very nice.

I need a name for this because I was just writing for fun one day in class and came out with this: ------------------------------------ Prologue: [/u] I was a Draknian, a ...

It sounds good to me. Although, not all populars are like that... Maybe you could put that in there somewhere?

Hi. You may call me Natasha. I do consider myself a good writer. I do think that my skills could be improved though.