blackfairiwings

I really like this, it's sad but in a good sort of way. Firstly, look it over for some spelling errors. I spotted a few but they were just silly ...

Firstly I really like your story (I've read all the chapters so far) Nextly the critique I want to know him or at least know him. I wasn't like just ...

This story definitely has potential (I read chptr.1 too) just be sure not to make it a copy of Twilight (soooooo many people are copy cats and it's unoriginal unless ...

Wow, this is really good. I'm not really sure if my opinion counts because I haven't written much, but this is really good. You should definitely finish it, I love ...