blackfairiwings

sorry about the confusion with some things i stopped working on it for a while and then started again but i forgot what i had already written

this part can be a bit confusing so let me clairify. my version of vampires lose all of their human memories except for their last one. so Kami is unaware ...

I really like this, it's sad but in a good sort of way. Firstly, look it over for some spelling errors. I spotted a few but they were just silly ...

This is the second part, if you haven't read the prologue i suggest you do unless you don't mind being a bit confused. If your critique is that i use ...

Firstly I really like your story (I've read all the chapters so far) Nextly the critique I want to know him or at least know him. I wasn't like just ...

This story definitely has potential (I read chptr.1 too) just be sure not to make it a copy of Twilight (soooooo many people are copy cats and it's unoriginal unless ...

Thanks for all the tips, grammar is really not my strong point. I always have to have my sister look it over and she's younger than me. I have an ...

This is just the prologue to a book I'm writing. It switches back and forth from two characters points of view so this is from Wrens'. I know it's short, ...

These are amazing, especially the photographs. The birds are so cool, did you actually get that close or just zoom in alot? i also love the one of the black ...

This is really good, you say 'the dragon' a bit too much though, other than that I think that it's pretty well written *i feel really dumb, this post is ...

Wow, this is really good. I'm not really sure if my opinion counts because I haven't written much, but this is really good. You should definitely finish it, I love ...