bisquit

The intentions of the poem are really good especially as poems of the sort tend to have a good impact on the reader. I will say though that you really ...

Firstly, i really enjoyed this poem It was cleverly written with lots of descriptive details. It was also very clever how you did the vertical words (i forget what they're ...

Perhaps it would be better if you made more of a story out of it? I'm not a massive poet and barely write it but i do read it quite ...