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I have pretty much agree with everything Spark said. It doesn't sound like you've got all too much plot or writing down on paper yet, and if you're already struggling ...

Are you only wanting to use writing as an outlet to certain parts of your life? Blogging is indeed a good way to get things off your chest, but that's ...

I'd agree that it sounds generic, and echo a lot of Spark's questions. I'm wondering about these Arturians though. The name instantly made me think 'Arthurian' from King Arthur, and ...

Whenever I write and study, I'll have the entire Lord of the Rings soundtrack on low in the background. I don't know what it is about it, but it really ...

For children's books, I'd definitely stay clear of blood and gore, sure. However, there's a lot of ways you can writer your children's story darker, without it upsetting the reader. ...

Awesome input, Prok. Spark, lovely post.

Do you know how to write fanfic? Just take the characters and/or setting you want and write what you want. I'm assuming you mean the 2001 film ' Manic' ? ...

It sounds like the only thing you know you want is a scene where your guys are escaping from a prison. You want a prison break. As Spark said, I'd ...

I'd say everything you read is somewhat beneficial. It might not help you the way it would to read a novel, for instance, but it's still beneficial to read. All ...

Yeah, I really like 'Mischief Moon' as well. It sounds interesting and intriguing.

Reading through this, I don't really have any problem with any of the names. Sure, a lot of names have meanings and connections that can prove distracting, but I found ...

Actually, now that Reise mentioned Quicksilver, it occurs to me that if you do end up with this superfast character, as well as giving his sister telekinesis powers; that would ...

Just another person chiming in to say that finishing it was the most important part. It shows perseverance, and it's all about learning. Also, @Snoink, I want to read that.

To be honest, I really like the sound of your story. It sounds like a lot of fun. To add to what Rosey said, I'd definitely agree on the reason ...

I like the 'Troy' suggestion. Would it be an idea to just go with a completely common name though? Without any significant meaning. I might have gone ahead and used ...