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Ditto, for every other Thursday. ;)

This is very, very helpful. Thanks, P o i n t e !

6/10 It's a pretty interesting opening. You can tell you're about to get introduced to a new character right off the bat, and hey, she's on a plane. Somebody's going ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll enjoy yourself here. ;)

For children's books, I'd definitely stay clear of blood and gore, sure. However, there's a lot of ways you can writer your children's story darker, without it upsetting the reader. ...

Ugh, come on... I posted the opening paragraph of my short Everyday Duels , and my result? Dan Brown My least favorite author. Great.

Guys, come on. >_

Awesome input, Prok. Spark, lovely post.

I actually like your second option, the birthday party. In fact, I might have expanded on that and try to visualize all the parts of a child growing up into ...

I'm going to start the hype train, feel free to hop on: @Iggy vs. @ fort @Widdershins !! This is going to get bloody ya'll!

Congratulations, Holly! ;)

Oh no, this is terrible news. :( Very sad to see another legend go. His first Discworld novel 'The Colour of Magic' is actually the first fantasy book I read. ...

Update!

I've participated two years in a row now, and both times failed to pass through the first round. I have a strong desire to repeat this a third time. :D ...

For getting to know everyone really fast!