bio-mechanic

Thanks for the crit! (: "He looked younger than his real age..." No, I meant what I said there. As in, he looks older in uniform, and looks his real ...

Hehe, thank you for the comments and crits, both of you! I'm really glad you read it through and such! When you said "blusher" did you mean "blush"? I meant...I ...

Heh, wow! I really enjoyed this! You did a fantastic job keeping the suspense and intrigue up, as well as writing the narrative very well. I'm looking forwards to reading ...