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Re: '...and Her People' pt1
Thanks for the crit! (: "He looked younger than his real age..." No, I meant what I said there. As in, he looks older in uniform, and looks his real ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Winter
This photo is really beautiful! You've 'framed' the picture well by having the trunks on either side, and it's a great new take to the 'regular' snowy-tree photo. The way ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: A few photographs :D
These are some cool photos you got here! 1. I love your shoes, and the way you edited it so the colour of them stands out. However, I agree with ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: '...and Her People' pt1
Hehe, thank you for the comments and crits, both of you! I'm really glad you read it through and such! When you said "blusher" did you mean "blush"? I meant...I ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: 25 Random Things About Me
Hee, I love these things. 1. I want to be a polyglot. 2. My name is hard to pronounce unless you know that I am Norwegian, and know that the ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: 'Allo!
Haha, your name sounds all cool and scientific Yep; it's actually from the title of the Front Line Assembly song You speak German!? I've been learning it since I was ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Return to the stars-- Chapter one
This is really intriguing, and I want to read more. There are some grammatical errors, but those can easily be fixed: most of all missing capital letters, commas and such. ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: 'Allo!
Naw, I've always been mad myself: girl with crazy hair and short temper who talks in German constant, and reads, writes and draws far too much. 1984 is the books ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: 'Allo!
Thank you all for he welcome :> Haha, I can't do hard core I can't do hardcore sci-fi, either; or even worse, I write something and find out something in ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: '...and Her People' pt1
R for language, violence and idealogically sensitive stuff. Speaking of idealogical stuff, I'd better just reinforce this, because I've been called a fascist and Nazi at school for this story ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: And Then.
I really enjoyed this. I find writing 1st person really difficult, but you did a very good job of it. I spotted a mistake; just a typo: As the wom ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: Leaving Humanity
Heh, wow! I really enjoyed this! You did a fantastic job keeping the suspense and intrigue up, as well as writing the narrative very well. I'm looking forwards to reading ...
Mar 1, 2009 -
Re: 'Allo!
Hello there! About myself: I'm Freja (the 'j' is said as a 'y', if you didn't know), and I'm 16. I don't mind being called Bio or Mech either, but ...
Mar 1, 2009
