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  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Woman

    Hey It's Bigmacloves Here For Another Review... This poem was a very outstanding piece of literature. I say that because it didn't just represent the basics of the topic. It ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: As We Get Older

    Hello, this is Bigmacloves (Mac Desvignes)!!!!! I have more than enough stuff to tell you about your poem. However, no one has the time to here me talk about useless ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Chapter 1 (Title, Undecided)

    Mac Desvignes, Hello, please ignore how rusty I am at writing these types of reviews. It has been a while since I have logged onto The Young Writers Society. So, ...

    Mar 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Paper Girl

    This was an amazing way to express the concept of a girl who lets people use her -- I am really impressed. The idea of a paper girl is really ...

    Sep 24, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Action / Adventure Re: Take Me Home: Chapter Two: The Nectarine

    Well, let me start off with, "Wow!" I am astounded because that was wonderful. I am in love with this story, and I hope to see it continue because I ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Take Me Home- Chapter One: How Charming

    Hey its Bigmacloves here for another review.... P.S. I just copied some one else review sense they had all my points in it This is an excellent start to a ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Music

    Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review I'm very suprised ! I thought this was gonna be a flow nightmare because all the lines were either really long or ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Love,Friends,and Family. Oh My!- Chapter 1

    Hey Catcha01 it is Bigmacloves here for another revire, WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! This was an outstanding piece of literature it left me wanting more. I love how you made it ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Other » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Quick Story Bio

    Hey Catnip it is Bigmacloves here for a tiny review. I just came across this and I would say I like where this is heading. This is a very brief ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Other » General, General Re: A Bisexual's Opinion On Life

    Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review, Honestly this was a great piece of literature. I thought this was amazing. I really do hope that you write a novel/book ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Call Girl [1]

    Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review, Honestly this was a great piece of literature. At first I assumed that you were a girl when I started reading it ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What To Do?

    Dear SecreteJournalist It is Bigmacloves here for another review, This is honestly a really well written poem. I love how it is very dramatic, yet very simple. I also enjoyed ...

    Jun 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You.

    Hey it’s Mac here for a review, This piece of literature is actually really outstanding. I love that you included Soul Eater in it. He is one of my favorite ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Born To Fight

    Hey Mac here for a review, This piece of literature is not half bad at all. I think you have a great idea flowing through your head. It also seems ...

    Jun 6, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: 6 Senses *Intro*

    This is an outstanding start and I believe the rest of the story will be even more outstanding. I love the idea of a sixth sense and I wonder if ...

    Jun 5, 2013


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