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Re: Woman
Hey It's Bigmacloves Here For Another Review... This poem was a very outstanding piece of literature. I say that because it didn't just represent the basics of the topic. It ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: As We Get Older
Hello, this is Bigmacloves (Mac Desvignes)!!!!! I have more than enough stuff to tell you about your poem. However, no one has the time to here me talk about useless ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1 (Title, Undecided)
Mac Desvignes, Hello, please ignore how rusty I am at writing these types of reviews. It has been a while since I have logged onto The Young Writers Society. So, ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: Paper Girl
This was an amazing way to express the concept of a girl who lets people use her -- I am really impressed. The idea of a paper girl is really ...
Sep 24, 2013 -
Re: Take Me Home: Chapter Two: The Nectarine
Well, let me start off with, "Wow!" I am astounded because that was wonderful. I am in love with this story, and I hope to see it continue because I ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Take Me Home- Chapter One: How Charming
Hey its Bigmacloves here for another review.... P.S. I just copied some one else review sense they had all my points in it This is an excellent start to a ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Music
Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review I'm very suprised ! I thought this was gonna be a flow nightmare because all the lines were either really long or ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Love,Friends,and Family. Oh My!- Chapter 1
Hey Catcha01 it is Bigmacloves here for another revire, WHAT THE FUCK!!!!! This was an outstanding piece of literature it left me wanting more. I love how you made it ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: Quick Story Bio
Hey Catnip it is Bigmacloves here for a tiny review. I just came across this and I would say I like where this is heading. This is a very brief ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: A Bisexual's Opinion On Life
Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review, Honestly this was a great piece of literature. I thought this was amazing. I really do hope that you write a novel/book ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: The Call Girl [1]
Hey it is Bigmacloves here for another review, Honestly this was a great piece of literature. At first I assumed that you were a girl when I started reading it ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: What To Do?
Dear SecreteJournalist It is Bigmacloves here for another review, This is honestly a really well written poem. I love how it is very dramatic, yet very simple. I also enjoyed ...
Jun 9, 2013 -
Re: You.
Hey it’s Mac here for a review, This piece of literature is actually really outstanding. I love that you included Soul Eater in it. He is one of my favorite ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Born To Fight
Hey Mac here for a review, This piece of literature is not half bad at all. I think you have a great idea flowing through your head. It also seems ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: 6 Senses *Intro*
This is an outstanding start and I believe the rest of the story will be even more outstanding. I love the idea of a sixth sense and I wonder if ...
Jun 5, 2013
