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Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter two.
Oh man I just... LOVE IT!!!Continue the story it puts me on edge XD but for now some other things to point out ;) "The tallest one asked,Diana hmmm it ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter one.
XD I love it continue the story! I just have to point out some stuff tho :3 "As I walking home, I saw a girl with curly strawberry blonde hair. ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
I love the idea, but you kinda got me mixed up...ok I'll say this, you have to stop repeating words choose other words to speak of something or someone and ...
Oct 8, 2010