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Re: My shining light
Lol, I just put stories and poems mixed togehter most of the time (I like it, it makes it more fun^^) that's why it seems like a short story, but ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: cherishing the bones
very beautiful, I like your art^^ It's very well said and so vivid :)
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Black sheep
ty :3
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: My shining light
"see?", I asked quietly,"Under the blossoming tree?" She shook her head."I don't see very well." "Come closer," I said, taking her gentle hand. "Look, there is a beautiful bird on ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Black sheep
lol I figure I should post it since I already have it under my profile^^ (did you know my mom actually cried reading that? XD)
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Black sheep
Through a street with silver lights, I walk, Down this path, I walk. People are staring, With weird gazes, searching. Looking, they seek normal norms. Different they see I am, ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: I Suck At Poetry
get the poem from the core of your soul, think about your feelings, your views and put them on paper...let it flow away from your mind^^
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter two.
Oh man I just... LOVE IT!!!Continue the story it puts me on edge XD but for now some other things to point out ;) "The tallest one asked,Diana hmmm it ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: A Green Baby named Who? chapter one.
XD I love it continue the story! I just have to point out some stuff tho :3 "As I walking home, I saw a girl with curly strawberry blonde hair. ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-(Prologue)
very beatiful,but one question when it sas "for the hundreth time during the prom night, I rotated my head to peer at their direction" isn't more like instead of peer ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Hatched Chapter One
I love the idea, but you kinda got me mixed up...ok I'll say this, you have to stop repeating words choose other words to speak of something or someone and ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: My novel is killing me slowly. I can't stand it!
I got a problem of that sort, exept each time I have to continue my book I get a block and it can take up to one month to have ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: One summer, two people and too much to handle .
WOW!!!That was like magic!!! (true some parts need ajustement, but OMG!!!)It was awesome! o(^w^)o By the way, it really did make me think of one of my first crushes!(seriously!) It ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: *spasm* Hello.
Lol. I actually hate bananas they have someting evil about them! >.> Anyways juste had to say that (I'm kinda random :3) I was wondering what style (of clothes, music, ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Nekuro
ty so much :D
Oct 8, 2010
