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Re: A Prayer Answered.
We had been laying on my bed in silence for 10 or 15 minutes. I could feel the mattress moving slightly with his breaths. I watched his chest rise and ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Newbie.
Hi! I like writing romantic stuff. However, I agree with you ... there should be something more, in most cases, than JUST romance. If it's a story, anyway.
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Newbie.
Hi and Welcome to YWS here are the two main rules here: 1- Review two works before posting any of your own. That way, everybody gets a review. Plus, people ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Preface “Brother, I am going to miss you,” A teenage-aged (teenager?) whispered to her brother as she hugged him. “I will miss you too, sister,” her twin brother whispered back. ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Newbie.
Hey guys! I'm new here. I'm Vanessa. I'm 14 years old. I love to write poetry. It's not something I believe myself to be REALLY good at, but I don't ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Memories revival
I think this is beautiful. I love how you tied music into the story. I have no criticism, except that at the end of the first stanza, I would take ...
Jan 18, 2009
