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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: A Prayer Answered.

    We had been laying on my bed in silence for 10 or 15 minutes. I could feel the mattress moving slightly with his breaths. I watched his chest rise and ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie.

    Hi! I like writing romantic stuff. However, I agree with you ... there should be something more, in most cases, than JUST romance. If it's a story, anyway.

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie.

    Hi and Welcome to YWS here are the two main rules here: 1- Review two works before posting any of your own. That way, everybody gets a review. Plus, people ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forbidden Love

    Preface “Brother, I am going to miss you,” A teenage-aged (teenager?) whispered to her brother as she hugged him. “I will miss you too, sister,” her twin brother whispered back. ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Newbie.

    Hey guys! I'm new here. I'm Vanessa. I'm 14 years old. I love to write poetry. It's not something I believe myself to be REALLY good at, but I don't ...

    Jan 18, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Memories revival

    I think this is beautiful. I love how you tied music into the story. I have no criticism, except that at the end of the first stanza, I would take ...

    Jan 18, 2009


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