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[[lame-o-tastic sythe]] like Beki said,silly poems are written by famous authors all the time,, [[you're gonna be that famous author]] haha, xD ilyy devonlynne

omfg, this is [s]awesome[/s] amazing! lol, oh.so.emo =] so freakin dark. man,you make me want to cut miiself now ______________________________________ does anyone have cutting utensils? xD

Wow,i.love.it. xD All of your descripitions explodes with "You're depressed". I really enjoyed you dark poem!You should write more of these kind of poems =] 9.5 out of 10

Thanks for the positive feeback. :)

These ideas in my head are wringing my conscience The love I feel is not yours to take But you have it all the same although. You will never know ...

There are a few grammer and spelling mistakes in the begginning, but the rest is fine. The last paragraph took me in and it was such as suspense. It had ...

I saw some spelling mistakes and that's it.I bet those mistakes were happens to everyone, besides that its a really good story.The ending got me confused a little. Maybe next ...

Thanks for the positive replies everyone. =] Next time I will remeber to cap my I's Thanks Again!

omfg, man,this remind me of my past. you deserve 89,215,563,464,556,425 stars =D its such a cute,flirty,and mysterious story. i'm going to post your story on myspace & my website. that's ...

Its good,but it needs more description. Your poem also seems like a short story,I don't like the way it was wrote. Just fix these problems and it would be perfect. ...

oh.so.deep. iloveit its a really emotional poetry. i want to cry,its that depressing in a good way xD

omg, =] its so darkk. so emotional. [[just like me]] -------------------------- If you enjoyed Archstormangel's "Dreamed of Hell" check out my poetry.

Two shots of hate from a mouth as loud as a gun, like an assassin ... who does it for fun. Two deafening blows in a war that has just ...

Silent Tears. Are tears that come unwanted. They show the suffering. Silent Tears. Come every waking moment They fall for perseverance. Silent Tears. Come because they erase the pain That ...