bethanyoverload

What is a cloudy sky? A soft blue with touches of white, pictures on a never ending mural, fluffly and bouncy always to be, a cloud for you a cloud ...

This is good but I still have something against it: you are rewriting one of the oldest clichés. Why dig it up from its rotty grave? Why not make your ...

very nice,the over all flow was good

that was very nice =3

i totally agree. ever sence i started to be laybeled i just told people im a person,not a cereal. Your a smart girl,im glad that youdicided to make this point. ...

i agree very much so with that point of veiw. They way that you conveyed your message was very well. GoooD Job!

i love it! short and sweet,and to the pencil's point

ooooooh! i found this a very "egde-of-your-own-tears" kind of poe. i liked it very,very much. kudos to you BroadwayGirl !!!

it is a very nice poem. the deatail in this short poem is amazing. all though the last line is slightly wrong. ...."We are those wind chimes." you cant be ...

vvvery nice ^.~ you did well...

thanks for the help,ill make sure that i will change some stuff,and hopefully make it slightly better ^.^ this is my first time writing a book instead of poetry. [b/]Once ...

your name: Beth i am: the whisper i wonder: what words i contain i hear: only the thoughts in my mind i see: only the truth behind i want: only ...

haha wow that was kinda funny

So we meet again? Chapter 1 “ My darling Lilleth, I will be home by 10:00 o’clock tonight. Dinner is in the fridge, it’s KFC. Sorry you don’t get a ...

this is the year to show your talents and,wow, its 2008!!!!!!love you all