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Re: pressure
I actually like this because it shows a lot of emotion.^^ You should touch up on a few things, it is important to take your time with the spelling. I ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Song interpretations
I love the way that your heart breaks with every injustice and deadly fate Praying it all be new and living like it all depends on you Here you are ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Song interpretations
You an I are gonna get it right Don't let me go It takes two to make a leader but One has to follow Help me, help me understand What ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Imprisoned
I really like this because it is different from other love stories. I can see the pain that he feels because of Chloe's death. The worst thing is that he ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Every Mile Every Second
Hello, This is my first piece of work that I have posted here. Although I have only posted the introduction, I hope that people will be interested in continuing to ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Red
I really enjoy these lyrics because it is not like anything I have seen. Usually songs are about life, love, stories, etc. This is completely original and although random, meaningful. ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Weakness?
"Weakness?", this is a very strong poem. I like how the poem is opened with "I'm locked in you-", I feel as if weakness is a living person. The person ...
Feb 15, 2010
