beforeIforget

thanks! i've rewritten the chapter and am working on revamping, since i've got 13 chapters written but they're all meh. but i really took your advice to heart! i think. ...

Thanks! I really just stole the names from people I've known (but you didn't hear that from me.)

thanks so much rhia! i really appreciate your comments, and the crits too 'cause you caught some things i never would have caught myself. ^__^ and it really touches my ...