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Nelly Miller was seventy five and very, very ill when she sold the property and moved into a hospice center closer to her daughter in Vermont, a year prior to ...

When you told me you loved me I was so happy stronger word than happy You held me close and whispered in my ear. what did he whisper? I loved ...

I'm in relatively the same situation..just I'm not romatically interested in the guy, he's my best friend. I would avoid adding in personal anecdotes like this: I realize that, as ...

Collect my soul, Unwavered from distance and reputation. Conjure up an attitude of silence To mimic the passage of time... Dwell into the eyes of the lonely and see their ...

A loud call from the hall signaled it was “The Big Day”, as Remy’s mom liked it call it, or for the rest of humanity-the first day of school. It ...

Remy shot up and gazed around the dark interior of her new bedroom shaking, “I hate nightmares”, she said, as she pulled the covers closer to her chin. In it ...

It says that the extension doc. is not allowed? What does this mean? Hello All! This is my first time posting in the Advanced Critiques section, so be kind! This ...

Once again, very addicting! Well done! And I love how you mentioned Twilight, very inventive! My room was decorated with dark colors such as purple and black. My room was ...

A milky glaze hovered above the icy waters. The ducks floated like buoys, occasionally dipping their orange beaks in looking for breakfast. The evergreen trees cast an ominous shadow amidst ...

This is very addicting I must say! As a Twilight lover the whole vampire thing has me hooked! Keep writing!! Here are just a few things I noticed! “1315 Brick ...

It seems some rare love may go beyond the surface, conquer just physical and personality traits, it can be deep rooted, engraved in both souls. Leaving an unavoidable dent-one that ...

I sat on the school bench, staring at the size 12 font unseeingly. My manuscript was paper-clipped to page 37 of The Odyssey, where I decided to place it to ...

[quote="shoosT"] Looking back on those days, we were so reckless; we lived without a care in the world. Getting drunk in the back of cars at twelve o’clock on a ...

His eyes sweep over my body, stopping again at my face. My cheeks dance with red. He suddenly takes my arm and pulls me towards him. We were so close ...

I'll get you little turtle you'll make a great soup I nearly died when I read this! I was in a particularly angry mood at this point, so if you ...