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Well I don't think I've had any as violent as that I guess but lots of different ones lol It started when I was pretty young. I used to complain ...

Hello everybody *waves* Well seen as I'm currently stuck on a plot point, I'll post a little about myself on here while I'm trying to figure it out. As some ...

Thanks for the review Haruno Sakura! In the first photo I was aiming to get just the birds in flight but when I looked back through all the photos, I ...

My favourites are the first and sixth. The others for me kind of lack something in composition or light. I'm going to disagree with some other reviewers and say that ...

I study Film at the moment but I did photography for a year, that in no way means I am good at it though because as soon as I could, ...

Hello yuki-chanx welcome to YWS :) I'm not really sure what this is supposed to be? Is it a prologue to a longer story? It is very short. I thought ...

phew, now I will get away with not being able to comment on grammar lol

Well I can't say anything about grammar because I am useless at it lol but I'll try and suggest a few other things. I quite like your writing style, at ...

Oooh OK 'waits with baited breath for chapter one'

Hey Texan Writer Sorry it took me so long to review. I have had a gazillion hand ins at university. But now I have a week off yipee! lol Well ...

Hey flytodreams. I assume you meant you wanted me to review this new prologue because it is the only other one in your portfolio and it says Icy paths on ...

Hey Texan Writer :) This was much better! I liked how the guards were introduced. It wasn't like ta-da guards! You got more of a sense of who they are ...

Thank you! I went along to my university library today and managed to find, Eats, Shoots and Leaves. As well as Elements of Style. So that was kind of awesome! ...

Lol wow you are so specific! I don't think I could ever be that specific about when I'm going to post a next chapter :P I look forward to it ...

Hello Rosy! Thought I would have a look at some of your work, seen as you have been helping me out so much :) I LOVE christmas. As you know ...