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Hey, Nutty :) Nice to meet you. You were recommended to me for reviews so here we go :P It's fantasy and so far I have to halves of chapter ...

Hey Sakura :) Title: Prince of Janovia Genre: Fantasy Fiction Summary: I would like you to review the second half of a chapter. I'm worried you won't though because it's ...

Hey Amniel :) nice to meet you. My brother is very big on Warhammer. We could never get him out of Games Workshop, they used to ring him up and ...

Nice to meet you Dan! :) Welcome to YWS. I wish I could write short stories! I'm trying to lol I just always want to put too much detail and ...

I found this quite interesting but I sort of feel like you revealed an awful lot in the prologue. However I don't know how your going to continue this story, ...

Thanks Rosey! I sorted out those few nit picks and I'll have a think about what you said about the Morlongs. I did want to hold back information on them ...

Hey, Well this is the second part of the first chapter of Prince of Janovia. I have really tried to apply what you all said about punctuation and such things, ...

Yeh. I thought it was just but or and though.

Oooh, ooh I have a question! I was told at school that when you put like, but or and that this was a pause where you could breathe so you ...

Yeh she had one blue eye and one brown eye :)

Hey here is a couple more of my photographs again let me know what you think :) Evil Swan! lol I have a fear of swans but mainly geese *shivers* ...

I have photoshop CS3 I used it for my photography course :P but as I said I don't really like touching stuff up even though sometimes its fun! I used ...

Hey Angel :) Yeh I do like living in Scotland, it gets pretty cold in the winter though. I live in Edinburgh actually and I love it. Lots of historical ...

Hey Lucy I'm Becki, nice to meet you :) I liked the idea behind this prologue. That a boy is taken away from his parents at an early age and ...

I quite enjoyed this actually. I had the sense that you the author knew a lot more about the world and the characters than I the reader did. I like ...