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This chapter was quite confusing. I started trying to do a paragraph by paragraph review but then a lot of the same problems popped up and it all just got ...

Hey, Vivacious :) I'm here to review! lol The bold parts are your writing and the underlined parts are the things I have changed. I tried to help with dialogue ...

Would you like me to review all of the parts?

The Lake District in the north west of England :P

Hey, Juju :) nice to meet you. Whilst reading this I was just very confused. I had to keep rereading the sentences over and over to actually understand what was ...

Thank you! :D I replied on the story.

Thanks Haruno! It's nice to get lots of opinions on a piece so you can see how best to edit it :) It's so weird that you think Mailan is ...

Hey, I have found I quite like reviewing. So I thought I would post on here and see if some people want their stories reviewing. Just a warning, I am ...

This was very short for a prologue and it was very fast! People say that a prologue should hook the reader and I think you sort of did that but ...

Hey, here are a few more :) The Lake District Sheep! I know this one goes a bit misty at the top but again I like it :P Out the ...

Hey savetheoceans, nice to meet you :) 1 - I quite like the detail of the leaves in this one and the different vibrant colours. However because your so close ...

I think the bird was just a type of seagull lol And if you want to see more I have another thread called 'Another Random Photographs'. I know what your ...

Oh and by the way! Your supposed to have given 2 reviews before you post a piece of work :) So get on out there and review someone else's work ...

Hey, urso major :) nice to meet you. I don't really do nit picky or grammar reviews. Mainly because I am horrible at grammar lol but I'll try my best ...

Hey Kitty :) Nice to meet you. Somebody recommended you as a good reviewer and from all the requests you are getting it looks like it's true lol I would ...