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Hey Seibhris :) Fred and three others followed behind closely - I think it would be better if you phrased this 'Fred and three others followed closely behind' it just ...

Hey Ultraviolet :) So I'm going to nit pick through this section of your story and then give some general comments. OK, I knew I that, - This doesn't make ...

Ok closing for requests at the moment! :)

Hey InnerVoice :) The young lady tucked a strand of black hair behind one ear and took a deep - I know it's difficult to find things to use to ...

Hey Auteur :) My face crumples, squeezing back tears. I have to be strong. - You switch tenses here. Before this you have been writing in past tense so this ...

Hey Skutter :) "Yes, I know it's of short notice and yes I do know what time it is, but this is important, alright, goodbye, Ms.Beecham . - You missed ...

Oki doki! Ellie, Durr, Ben. Your covers are done! So I hope you like them lol Ellie's (yours is a bit wide for some reason lol) Durr's Ben's So let ...

Here you go Pudin and Irish. PM me to let me know if you like them then I can give you proper copies to put as your desktop :) Irish's ...

Just going to close for requests at the moment, I've got plenty to be getting through :p I'll let you know when I open it back up again.

So I'm bumping this thread and changing it a little. I need some more practice with drawing and photoshop so I'm opening up this thread again so that you lovely ...

I have pretty much always written in unjoined just because I can't even read my writing if I try to write in cursive, plus I hold my pen funny so ...

Hey Dems! :P Since I know you have to submit this tonight I'm just going to do a nit picky review and not all the overall stuff. Hope that's ok! ...

This little chunk of story has been floating around on my computer for a while. I actually did it as part of The Short Story Event that was going on ...

Hey tam_ara Cynthia was a read a huge amount of books. - I don't really understand this sentence. Did you mean 'Cynthia was reading a huge amount of books." ? ...

Edinburgh! That is all.