beccalicious94

Ladybug golashes In the pearl gray puddles Jumping ‘round in the rainy day muddles. Forget about the sun That squash yellow heat And come join me in the fun On ...

An Existence Mundane Frustrating and dense, a needless pretence. Why am I tortured by glares so intense? Scared icy eyes, corrupts your insides. They shackle madness and beauty, and flies. ...

The shock of thy seduction, rages deep within my soul, like a galloping stallion. Mere gazes from your calming eyes, and thy silken cloak, awaken tingling electric arcs, within my ...

Something i just wrote The knife it stares at me Hoping to enter her throat The pain and suffering She may cry out I may laugh But the end will ...

The mirror is, shattered, into many, pieces. Each shard is like, a memory, lost beneath the, pain. Like a petal of a, rose, that lands upon, a candle. Though all ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem! The fact that you included so many personal details really helps bring out the love in the poem. When reading the first few stanzas ...

This is very succinct, yet very well put. There really isn't anything bad to say. I really love the emotion poured throughout the poem. Keep up the great work!

I think I'm going to ram my fingernails into the back of my hand. With matching charcoal minds we find we can't converse unless through loaded shouts. Mop mop mopped ...

I can taste the color purple trickling down the back of my throat And feel the unraveling scent of a used bar of soap I hear the way your hair ...

I think this poem is very cute, as it is sing-song like in spanish. I like the first stanza very much, but it might just be a personal peave of ...

Utterly two minds imprisoned by one another. Both own a key but neither wish to hand it over. Do we love for safety? A sense of knowing? An existence where ...

Firstly, thanks for commenting on piece, I had to return the favor :D I love the power of the first four lines, very bold and descriptive I like how it ...

Parasite Unknowingly entered but easily accepted Initially unnoticed and seemingly fine Careless actions and loss of judgment You’re eating away at me My insides are rotting… what insides? I’m a

I really liked this piece. I find your choice of formatting interesting, though. I like the description of actions and personification "voice hummed." I think the second paragraph ends awkwardly ...

Hello online community! My name is Becca, and I'm thrilled to be part of the Young Writers Society. I live in New York, and am currently still in school. I ...