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I really liked the message of the poem and how you used the analogy of your shoe to convey something deeper. Nice work!

I really like this piece! I think you do a good job conveying emotion in the narrative style. Keep it up!

Really good poem. The only thing to work on is maybe the grammar a bit, for instance When we just be who we are? Why should we be treated differently, ...

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Great article! I feel your vivid descriptions of the current economic situation. The only grammar issue I could find was "not employees, employers NOR their families." Your personal anecdote was ...

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I thought this was a great poem! I love the emotion conveyed throughout and the use of questions. We have similiar writing styles, so I found this piece particularly interesting. ...

Silliness :D You used to take my covers, You used to hog my bed. You used to steal my pillow, Without leaving me a thread. You used to snore in ...

I loved this poem! I thought it flowed smoothly for the most part, and I like the analogies you use. The rhyme scheme worked for you wholelistically but it was ...

So I thought these lyrcis we're really great, and you should never ever throw things out!!! The only nitpicky grammar comment I have is the last line instead of "fell" ...

How the roses smell so sweet, And their thorns a warning sign, A signal we all should heed, Before we cross that line. - For the rose itself is not ...

I am a fish. Small and insignificant. I live in this pond, nay this ocean. I am pale blue with grey stripes. I am part of school, but yet no ...

Paranoia grips my churning mind, As sleep comes not to me. I shift my positions while upon my bed, To seek the gated dream. - Relentless attempts at a perfect ...

Bawdy Lover BY Adrian Touch me on my thigh, please. Don’t hesitate and resist this pleasure zone. Caress the smooth and curvy flesh, and leave no spot undiscovered. Is it ...

His black hair falls over black eyes. A glance a way I dare fills my stomach with butterflys. I watch him from afar I keep my feelings at bay. On ...