beccalicious94

Considering both the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying and the unique aspects of the University of Pennsylvania, what do you hope to learn from and contribute to ...

“It’s a bit messy” I warn my guests. They approach 4M, a door plastered with signs that read “No smoking”, “Shoe free zone”, and “Doorbell broken, knock hard!” Upon taking ...

As a student in a competitive college-preparatory high school, it is easy to lose yourself in a system where everything is quantifiable. You are measured by the grades you earn, ...

This is a beautiful poem with great imagery. To me this poem make me think of hiding behind darkness. Although I'm not sure and frankly don't need to know why ...

Welcome to YWS, I can see this is your first post. :D I'm really sorry about your boyfriend acting like a jerk. Although all written expression is welcome, I would ...

Preface: These are personal essays I am writing for admissions to university. Of course, all constructive criticism is welcome. Happy reading! 1. The biggest risk I ever took was going ...

This is one of the most heartfelt and touching pieces I ever read on YWS. It is authentic, genuine, and I could hear your voice shine through. At times the ...

I can’t explain the joy I get when bruises stain my skin. And no I’m not the sort of guy, Who keeps torment within. It comes off as a bit ...

Although I am in no way qualified to assess the historical premise upon which this poem was written, I find it powerful and emotional. I think you captured the feelings ...

Look! Here, and she'll bow The crowd is hot But no one really knows Who's screaming. Now! Execution Simulation Jealous, Who loves who? When the crowd is In it to ...

Preface: This is a personal essay I am writing for admissions to university. In this essay I really wanted who I am to come out, and I hope it did. ...

I am homeless, It's that simple, What can I say, There is no doubt, I live on the streets, I sleep stars, I am dirty, Cold. I wish for security, ...

I agree with above that the title doesn't fit. How about something like "confessions never spoken"? It is a short, succinct poem that really makes you think. There is vivid ...

Preface: This is a personal essay I am writing for admissions to university. In this essay I really wanted who I am to come out, and I hope it did. ...

I really enjoyed reading this piece! You convey a good sense of emotion with your strong verb choice, and powerful imagery. Not much criticism I can offer. Keep up the ...