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Re: Cuddle Application 1: Truth or Dare
Buenos dias! Your writing is quite good, and can become amazing with some polish. I can safely say, you have described being drunk perfectly. You have captured the feverish silliness ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: The Threshold of Destiny- Chapter One
Hi there! beans here, with some beans. Hope you like beans. I like your description of your main character, but it feels a little out of place. Perhaps you wrote ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter One [Revised]
Howdy! Nice to meet you! This'll be my first review for today. The Good- -First off, good job leading the story with a cold open. We don't know what's going ...
Aug 12, 2014
