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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Cuddle Application 1: Truth or Dare

    Buenos dias! Your writing is quite good, and can become amazing with some polish. I can safely say, you have described being drunk perfectly. You have captured the feverish silliness ...

    Aug 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Threshold of Destiny- Chapter One

    Hi there! beans here, with some beans. Hope you like beans. I like your description of your main character, but it feels a little out of place. Perhaps you wrote ...

    Aug 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Last Breath of Fire Chapter One [Revised]

    Howdy! Nice to meet you! This'll be my first review for today. The Good- -First off, good job leading the story with a cold open. We don't know what's going ...

    Aug 12, 2014


Homo sum, humani nihil a me alienum puto (I am a man, I don't consider anything human foreign to me)
— Terence