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Re: Save the world.
Good job. I like the relations to fairy tales. There's a lot of emotion shown here, and your poem captures it beautifully. Keep writing!
Sat Jun 03, 2017 4:11 pm -
Re: With the Rooster's Crow (Complete)
I'm guessing fantasy, sort of. I love the title, it sounds so ominous. The last line is good. One question, though; if that rooster guy called the sun up, what ...
Fri Jun 02, 2017 8:53 pm -
Re: -=The Sorting Hat=-
Pretty good. I like the excuse about the boxing match with Peeves. Maybe could have included something about Albus Dumbledore, gazing at you intently. Overall, I like it!
Fri Jun 02, 2017 8:30 pm