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Hello! Nice story, but you've got a lot of mistakes when it comes to writing it. To make it easier for you, I've copied the lines that didn't seem right ...

Hello! This story definitely grabbed my attention. You're good at describing the characters and the story. I didn't find anything wrong with your grammar or spelling and etc. Please continue, ...

Hello dragnet! Great story! I actually loved it. Your story was well written but you do have some mistakes. Wanting to get rid of us because we didn’t bend over ...

Hello there! I thought your story was great. Don't you think this is more of a romance than fantasy? Anyway, you didn't have so much mistakes. There were some though, ...

Hello nixonblitzen. I like this story. I didn't find so much mistakes, except -- "Bridget drew little hearts next to him name" Isn't it supposed to be 'his'? Anyway, it ...

Hello, how can you move a topic to a different forum? Like if you had a topic in Sci-fi but you want to move it to romance, how can i ...

Hello there! Well let's see, your friend here has a great story. I like the way she explained how she got her powers one by one. You've got typos here ...