barefootrunner

I'll review the grammar in depth first. Sorry about the harsh, nitpicky criticism! I'm warning you in advance that I am very fiddly about grammar and that I really do ...

I loved the story - it was so surprising! You need lots of work on keeping those tenses straight, though. They were really mixed up. I just copied the whole ...

I really liked this! Great, gripping idea with lots of potential for development. A few picks at typos and grammos: But we not to ever criticize or question it, Karuk ...

Yes, its me, yet again. The wolf eyes the tattered cloak still held tight to her chest with her other hand. "eyed" would make that correct tense. I liked the ...

Hello! It's me again, being nitpicky. I just quoted the whole thing so that I could do the red marker thing that teachers seem to enjoy so much, but it ...

Hi Leah! Just noticed one spelling mistake: "mussle" is spelt "muzzle". Otherwise - great work! Love it. I like the fast pace and now I'm curious enough to read every ...

Okay - let's start. This story is absolutely grotesque, witty and I like it. A few grammar mistakes I'd like to point out: "Once upon a time, in a very ...

I just pasted the whole story here. I'll highlight the points that bother me a bit. Sorry in advance if I am a bit harsh and nitpicky - I hope ...