bard_of_life

Computer lab... girl sittin across from me... kinda liked her... BOOM! you could hear my fart in the other computer lab. First... silence... then the girl yelled "CLINT!!! GROSS!!!" and ...

AAAAAaaaaannnnyywwwwaaayyy.... getting back to the topic. I was in 5th grade and in math at the time. None of our class knew, but when the period ended, one of my ...

Wow, I couldn't stop reading, this is pretty good. I think the history lesson would be a good prolougue. I thought it really helped you understand the son's motives. The ...

Wow this was awesome a little confusing, but awesome all the same. After your paragraph break, it almost seemed as if you had switched into second person view. (Ask me ...

This has real depth to it. I considered it very well written. I never noticed the change from past to present tense at all. Do you live in New York, ...