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Ashen Millen, her village I lay against my tree and watched the sky. My home was a tree in the forest next to the village, so I knew what was ...

If anyone wants, they can do a profile for Anthony. (read my post for Ashen Millen) He is cocky and arrogant, but loyal to his friends. (especially Ashen.) Possible love ...

Ashen Millen, her home village The market was crowded at this time of day, which was good for what I was planning to do. I hunched my shoulders and let ...

Diana Cloven, Castle in the Capital City I rushed through the courtyard, my feet scraping on the uneven stones that created it. My dark hair flew out behind me in ...

My first review day ever! Ya!

Totally, cant wait!

Diana Cloven A life where you could do anything but feel nothing, I suppose. So I could bring people happiness even if I couldn't feel happiness myself. If you could ...

You know have another commoner. I believe she is quite interesting.

Name: Ashen Millen Age (any age is fine): 15 Gender: Female Position (Specify which of the characters in the character list): Commoner Appearance: Ashen is about 5 foot 6 and ...

Just to let you know, Sapi, I changed my name a bit to Diana Cloven (forgot the last name, sorry!), Just fyi.

What kind of question is that? I don't think I'd like to live at all if those are the choices. Would you rather be dirt poor and have a wonderful ...

Nobility Name: Diana Cloven Age: 16 Gender:Female Position:Lady-in-waiting Appearance: Diana is small but pretty, with dark features. She has dark brown hair and long eyelashes with dark green eyes. S

Thanks so much, that definitely helped!

Okay, here's the gist of my dilemma. I am writing a novel but am trying to get a character relationship to go the way I want. Basically, a girl meets ...

The main advice I use when writing (especially novels) is to create a character chart and always see things from the character's point of view. You are that character.