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bailecielo

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sweetest of Me Yet

    Thanks for the reviews guys! :D Honestly, I don't like this poem quite as much as the others but I thought it'd be quite amusing to voice out some sarcasm ...

    Aug 5, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Funky Rhyme Scheme?

    Oh yah, follow-up comment. Better title, dear! :D And it was worth reading :D

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mirror as a Mirror

    Thanks for all the reviews. I'm just a bit upset that people didn't quite understand the real message of the poem. It was supposed to have more depth than it ...

    May 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tact

    Thanks bf! :D I think this one's my fave too... haha! Finally! Something that's not about LOVE! LOL! :D

    May 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tact

    Big_Cheesy_Grin: I think i owe it to you to do some explaining.. A question without an answer, do I have to show about? Rhetorical. Those lines have sort of a ...

    May 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty Stare

    Hi Eimear! :D Thanks for the review. One of the best reviews I ever had. :D I love rhymes and yes, it's a lot of fun but it's definitely hard ...

    May 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: For Love Lost

    Hi everyone! :D Thanks for the reviews! :) BF: fixed it up! Thanks for noticing! Gensonwrtr9: Thanks! I will! :D Take care guys!:D

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Love's Tragedy

    Hi everyone! :D THANK you all so much for the reviews. They really helped! :D I hope i got things right this time! :D These are the best reviews I've ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Silent Whispers

    Hi everyone! Thanks for all the reviews. I fixed the punctuation and capitalization already! :D Glad you noticed! Itachiwonmyheart: It's alright! I don't think you're mean at all. I get ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Two Doors

    Well, thanks! :D i had fun doing it! :] but, since i posted it as a poem, i guess it has to be reviewed first, right? So, if anyone saw ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Uncertainty

    thanks bf! :] yaahh.. i followed the syllables... i kinda' liked the older one better, but this one's fine, i guess :] yap! im so0o0o excited! :] wow! lapit na ...

    Apr 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Contradicting Forces

    on second thought, forget my suggestion... :] it'll totally ruin the rest of it :] LOVE it! :]

    Apr 26, 2009


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