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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Goodbye

    I thought this was a good idea, a little cliche, but pretty good. I think it's a good start to a new story and you should definently continue it. I'm ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Mayor's Daughter

    Why was she so mean to the old cobbler, but really nice and talkative to the lady? She just spilled a big peice of her life to this old woman ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Dancing Bones

    First of all, my biggest problem is that it seemed that in the end you were trying to make it about this boy that saw all these ghosts, but he ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Stella's Chronicles: Love and War

    I thin the concept is extremely interesting! I've never heard anything like it! I would love to see a "blood runs thicker than water" story line where she doesn't know ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: He Wasn't Too Old For Her

    I was immediately drawn to this. At first I thougt it was from te 1600's and the teacher was living in the house of the girl that was in love ...

    Jul 1, 2009


I am always saying "Glad to've met you" to somebody I'm not at all glad I met. If you want to stay alive, you have to say that stuff, though.
— Holden Caulfield