babymagic18

well written I like your piece b/c it stays in onne place and doesn't have you all over the place losing the spot or trying to figure out who is ...

Okay so this is only decent work it needs alot to it to really make others want more from you. You need to describe the girl her features whats shes ...

I thought it was very well written I like a love story with a bit of drama to it. I feel it make it more exciting to read ya know ...

This was ok written just a tip of advice when you describe a person make them look believable and realistic. you want to draw the readers to the character not ...

hey that was a really good poem don't listen to what others say you know what your talking about I only wish I could learn to write poems the way ...

That was a really great story I really believe that you will have many stories published in your lifetime it's a great goal one I would also love to achive. ...

it was very good you should keep up the good work i am right now working on a story I started a while back not sure if people would really ...

this is a good writing piece your a good writer yeah there were some mistakes but I won't point them out to you. Some people don't get that when your ...

this is a very addictive story it really drew me in like few story can do to me. Please continue I would just hate for you to end it like ...

It was a beautiful story you seem to really be into writing stories like this can I ask you a few questions? What got you into writing? Can you see ...