babygirl12

Hey there. Looks like this poem is quite popular for its criticism. I have to agree with StoryWeaver, this poem holds so much potential if only you gave it that ...

Wow! This poem really grabs your attention. In some parts I think it leaves you hanging but then again poems do that, right? You gave such great description! Very very ...

Well put. Honestly for a while i was confused about the focus of the poem. But closer to the end, I believe i got it. Nice job. :] Keep it ...

Wow!! very nice!!! :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Awe!! Cute!!! :]

I like the nature pics you took!! very nice!! keep it up!! -BG-

I like the drawings of the many hands. And the one of the water at sunset. And the one the eye...the one that makes it look huge. :] Very nice!! ...

Wow!! Amazing!!! I believe I don't have anything else to say except this... Dang!!!! That's really good!!! :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Nice. :] Sad, but nice. Keep it up!! -BG-

This is sad, but very well written. I really like it. I don't believe you need criticism. Very nice. Keep it up!! :] -BG-

Very nice!! once again!! :] very interesting...still lacking in some punctuation...but over all nice. :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Wow!! really nice!! And i can see it is quite popular..:] keep it up!! -BG-

Its cute. :] There isn't much needed advice in this poem. It just is. And its nice, cute, and unique. :] Keep it up!! -BG-

Thanks guys, once again. :] Thanks for the encouragement!! I wasn't sure about this one either... But thank you. :] -BG-

Thanks guys! :] I was really unsure about this poem. Thanks, you both encouraged me. :] -BG-