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Really nice... YOu've got talent like most people (if not all) that get on this website.... Keep up the good work.. i have no real critiscim (idk how to spell ...

Dang, Tosha...Your good. well of corse i've always known that heehee:) but this is really good.... keep it up...(i know you will) =P

Wow, your famous...heehee:) Either that or i havent been on in a long time... like i had said when you were writing it... Amazing...:)

Thanks, And yaah that guy does have a great effect on the girl...:D but thanks for all of the comments ...:) and Bowolves thats nice...you should post it if you ...

Wow, really nice. Its really good. Keep up the good work. :D

hey tosha finally got on huh?? heehee!! thanks for the comment...

It is very good... Its deep in emotion.... It also gives us a clue about you.. and those poems...which are most... always end up bein the best... :D Keep up ...

Wow, Its really good.... Although it kinda leaves people depressed... Its sad...but its good... The depth of desrciption is also very well written.. Thats one thing im workin on....heehee! :P ...

Welcome to YWS..:D Your poem kinda left me speechless Good job... (oh and the speechless thing is a good thing just to let you know..:P)

I agree....that it is very demanding in reading it....:P It is interesting, yet simple, and fun to read... You kinda have to catch up with the rhythm of it... But ...

Thankyou... and ...yaah... I know my punctuation and stuff isn't the best... but thankyou for the compliment. :D

Here I am Just a girl And here you are You're more than the world. I feel like I'm Beyond the sky I can see the stars Glisten in your ...

I likey! I kinda got lost..... but thats easy for me to do anywhere... Hee! Hee! :) Its nice... Keep up the good work :)

It is amazing how many people write about rain. I dont think I've gotten to even half of the people that do. I am one of them. Hee! Hee! I ...

Thanks everyone for the tips. I know my punctuation and grammar might not be the best yet...but that was what summer did to me... ha jk. But thankyou :) And ...