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  • Other » General, General Re: gross

    So hey, I checked this out, and a lot of them are pretty cool. I'll only address the ones I was particularly interested in, or had qualms with. 1. I ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Perfection

    This was probably the shortest piece I read that was actually satisfying. To start off, I liked how you used the sentence structure "So [insert adjective]" because the repetition makes ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: S'harani

    Before I start this review, I have to agree with the buddy above me - it's a bit too long. But whatever, I read the whole thing and in general, ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fallen Angel

    To start off, congratulations with managing to keep this reader interested enough to read every word. I'll write how I interpreted the story. Characters: Malachi (The Lord of the city? ...

    Jul 6, 2011


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