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Thank you so much! I just went back through the work to hopefully add some breaks in a scene and make it easier to follow. I've never really thought about ...

I could see the confusion

I could see the confusion

Thank so much for this! I greatly appreciate reviews like this :) If you don't mind me asking, which paragraph(s) got confusing? I'd love to go back through it to ...

Thank you for this review, I really appreciate it :) I went through the story again and, hopefully, successfully dropped hints that about how the mercs are off. I think ...

Usually, when a human being is in combat, there's this thing called adrenaline. When adrenaline kicks in, most of the time people have a difficult time realizing they have injuries ...

I'm glad it was helpful! I know I've gotten some unhelpful reviews so I wanted to help out as best as I could because your writing is phenomenal :) I'm ...

Well that's Rei's character! The reckless dummy, haha. Doesn't mean she's strong though. I didn't know that made her overpowered but I guess I'll keep an eye on it if ...

This was a really beautiful read and hit me at my core. You did such a great job pulling me in and putting me through everything the narrator had been ...