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Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 1: Enemies We Were, What Are We Now?
Hey! So this is a review I guess...since that is what I am doing. I love this scene! You have great dialogue and minor grammatical errors. I'll be honest and ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Life or Death? Chapter 3- Getting to know the victim?
Dang! I just started reading a few of your chapters and you are doing great! But since this is a review, I must be a little critical. About your previous ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Absent Chapter One: A Bolt From the Blue
Okay....I think this is a review. All right, I loved your setting and tone throughout the passage, it was constant and easy to follow. I love the different characters and ...
Apr 26, 2014