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Re: is this a good come back?
I fixed the punctuation. Is it better?
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: is this a good come back?
Her lips They burn That old familiar taste; Too bad My words Have all yet gone to waste. My hands Her sides While lying waist to waist . That look ...
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: No One
I give up. I cant write and I just have to face it :cry:
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: Welcome
Welcome... welcome to a world where people fight and think that they are right. were people take things for granted and find out in the long-run that we shouldn't. Welcome... ...
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: November's Child
I think it is really good, Keep it up!!!!
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Your Heart
I am sorry a bout the gramer I was in a hurry.
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: No One
No One Have you ever felt like some one was watching you? staring right at you, but know one is there? feelings,being scared,whose there? stalker, you turn no ones there! ...
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Have you ever thought?
Thinking? Lay there, think, think deep inside Do you fail to abide by the countless tries and tears you have cried with the endless ties and thoughts you hide Staying ...
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: please come back
Please come Back I love you I mean it I'm sorry I am sorry you don't feel the same way and you don't have the burden of knowing someone feels ...
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Love
Love Love is a strong word It takes a lot to say "I love you" It takes a lot more to say "I love you" and truly mean it It ...
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Your Heart
.:: Your Heart ::. our heart is a fragile part of our life It is like this side up with arrows or , caution fragile Some are danger stay away, ...
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Falling in Love with Parades, Military Marches and the girl
I like it!!!!! Good job :D
Oct 24, 2006