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Re: Elyse- Chapter 1
Hey BlackSheep! I just came to look at your profile, and I saw that you have written this novel! I thought since you had donated so much time to my ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Gold to Nothingness
Hey :) I loved this piece, very thoughtful, with beautiful metaphors and description :) This is my review, sugegstions are in bold... Angela sighed. She sat in a coffee shop, ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: The History of Time
This piece is cool, and quite thought-provoking... and random too! xD I like it though, please continue, i think this could be a great start to a story! -Ava
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: If Only They Had Read the Instructions
Hey :) I am going to review your story now... obviously xD Sorry, ill start now :) comments and correction will be done in bold. all ideas are just suggestions ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: What You're Missing
WOWOWOWOWWWW :O This is an amazing piece of writing!! The description was wonderful, and I loved the idea (although ive seen it before, i like your spin on it ) ...
Nov 10, 2010 -
Re: Crackling Fire
Crackling Fire Imagine rolling hills going on for miles and mile without an interruption of a tarmac road or a sound of an engine. All you can hear is the ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: My heart in your hands.
I loved this poem! Its really sweet, yet kinda sinister... in a way o.o I enjoyed reading it and although i dont know the hidden meaning, i can see that ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Foretold (Chapter 5- Revised)
Chapter 5- The rest-stop When I woke up, I didn't move, I just stared up at the always starry sky. My heart pumped regularly, I diverted thoughts from my life, ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Torin would probably kill himslef o.o
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Bliss: the Chronicles of Charlie and Logan part 2 (edited)
Once again, a great piece of writing :D I really enjoyed it :) Kepp writing please! -Ava
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Foretold (Chapter 4)
awhh thanks! Im gald a have a follower, i just got a really harsh review, and it amkes my smile that you like it :) Thanks! -Ava
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Hayden Dylan
Hey :) This is a very good piece of writing- i enjoyed reading it alot! any words i put in bold are just suggestions... im pretty sure you are a ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: Foretold (Prolouge +Chapter 1)
Thanks for the review, although it seemed kinda harsh, im sure you had some good points :) The reason it doesnt snow because the sun has died out, therefore the ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Will review for donation of points or reviews in return
Please could you review the first chapter (and prolouge) of my novel? I would love to review you work, but dont get excited, i am apretty awful reviewer, so i ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: RAWR!...Ahem. Would You Like A Review? (CLOSED)
oops yeah sorry xD
Nov 7, 2010